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NAME THE BLOG POST: Watch your hand!

Summary

Watch your hand is an overdramatic comedy where an unseen person is having trouble keeping his cool with a recent restriction.

Logline: When an unseen person’s pleasures are taken away, he’ll have to let his hand take action to give him the satisfaction he craves for. 

Goel: Make it intense for a moment and have a build up to an unexpected punchline of a climax.

Questions

Is there anything I could do to make the lighting better?

Could the timeing on some of the shot’s combined with the music be better constructed?

Feed back-

More ligthing attenton on the hand in the dark could have been more effective.- Ben Anderson.

Some shots were a little too fast,  not matching that well with the music. – Ben Anderson